Oblivous ( Very Sad Story ) [ Moonlight Sonata - Beethoven]
Wednesday, February 22nd, 2012 at
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I love this…
your every word connects to the music. great job and keep it up
Kudos! Even a stone would be touched by your writings, I am stunned.
Kudos!
you are missing an “i” in oblivous
I wouldn’t know what sadness is I’ve been asleep for the last few hundred thousand years. Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaooooooooooooooooooooooo :L
amazing awsome writting your an awsome author of tradgity
amazing. i also want to be an author but we are in two different genres maybe u can give me some advice
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This is really good!!
That s one of the most sorrowful things I’ve heard. You did say you wrote this after a heart break right? I’m so sorry.
Yeah, it’s a awesome song. But everytime i hear this song, Resisdent evil Part 1 from ps1 pops up in my head.
amazing story great job my friend
smoke up bitch go get a life lets smoke cause a stranger told us to hey u know what we didnt get expelled from 2 schools
DylanTricky1 dude who cares about school?or parents or anything? My mom disowned me when I was 17 for getting expelled from 2 schools real talk. U don’t need a job I just sell weed all day man. Ur at a good age I started wen I was 13. Forget about ur work, sit back and smoke up.
@nicolecandy20 learn about talent before you accuse people of not having any.
@nicolecandy20 learn about talent before you accuse people of not having any.
kinda like my life,except its about school.i am a sixth grader anonymous. i have a weeks worth homework to do in three days and i haven’t even started.i`m already crying to the point where my tear bags are dry.i believe i`m a disgrace to my entire family because i get so many pink slips,i don`t do work,or homework.and i`m thinking suicidal thoughts….suicidal thoughts at the age of 11….
Sorry..this was sort of boring to me…im an honest critict you should be more lively in your writing but….expand your horizens is what i always say!
wow..! this was amazing …I actually cried..>!
beethoven was a genius, a Fact
i thought it went really well. It than began to go a little down hill towards the end but all in all, great
I cried so hard… You’re such a beautiful writer…
great version
my plan is 1 chapter each day after school (if i miss a day i write two) and 2 chapters on weekends
Good tips!
@IAmMediocreAtBest da fck
keep u fed LOL
@Thelongmanable the academics are kinda lazy to rewrite all the textbooks i’d guess
@IAmMediocreAtBest you were happy hey, thats good enough
Once upon a time I wanted to write a book then I did and I was happy. Until I showed others, then I found out I am a terrible writer the end
ALSO why is so important in school we learn about every major world issue from the Roman empire when there is so many more important things in those era that were going on. Oh thats right killing people and war is alot more intresting sorry my bad. On that note Why is Nikola Tesla not in the history books at school a sweedish descent guy who invents AC, Makes worlds first power plants, AC motors etc. Personal theory is due to he called Einstines theory vague and misleading no use for E=Mc2 still
Intresting thing about Scottish people. All irish people are descendants of Scottish people from the northern tertories. As an american we face the Delima one thing says your Irish another Scottish so which was it. The only thing I have found from research is that Scottish settled Ireland from the north and later became seperate from scottish calling there selves Ireland. Intresting note IRELAND SCOTLAND BOTH WORDS IN LAND AND THREE LETTERS AT THE BEGINNING.
That is so not true the average novel is around 75 to 100 thousand words which that gives the book volume and is what sales books not the cover, not the great words inside the book its all about our internal impulse that the bigger the book the more we are getting. Two ways to write something. 1. Guy goes to the store. 2 Guy has epic journey going to the store. Either way the story is not enhanced only the volume of words.
here in scotland, every november, writers month, all novelsits are set the challenge to write a novel in a month, sometimes you cannot complete it, but at the very least it gets a piece out onto the paper, besides, you can keep writing your other large novel at your own pace, eveyone writes diffrently which these videos sometimes misinterperupt, i have managed to write a story in a month, ok it was a first draft but thats where novels come from
Got a draft together of the fourth chapter in my fifth book, anyone any time to read over it and let me know what they think. (Just need a public response in terms of character/setting/atmosphere) Inbox me if your interested.
@Thelongmanable nice story
Hi guys, working on my fifth and possibly final novel. (Not in a series)
Anyway, I’m writing out of my comfort zone on this one, and would appreciate some opinions. Anyone with any time to read a few chapters? (Horror genre) Inbox me please, thanks.
Only the mafia decides on who and who doesnt get published. It has since day one been controlled by the Mafia. There is zero to no chance any of us will ever get published due to they pick and choose who does and does not get published. Also they have developed a process of picking who they want from early age or certain family groups. Give up thats what they want so they can take the manuscript of yours you sent in give it to someone else and walla free money off of your hard work. Truth sucks.
@9lk00583 Yes, but it usually results in me not finishing it.
Thanks, I wrote an epic novel in 30 days!
..not.
@9lk00583 in my school we got PA nd i did that its awesome
she talks about everything except how to write a novel in 30 days
@notatnik150 Stevenson technically rode Jekyll and Hyde in six days.
improv writing is fun anyone tried it before
you are hot
“On The Road” was written in 3 weeks if you don’t count time spent gathering experience.
Why not 60 days? 90 days?
It is inspirational to think that anyone will try to write a novel that is more than a pale shadow of the novels they themselves enjoy, in 30 days. But, I agree with some of the posters here: It is a great motivator to get started!
Was any classic ever written in 30 days?